What an amazing way to post your story. It makes your blog look so much more interesting. I would love you to come and show this to some of my kids.
Great description of your trail ride Tracey. I wonder where the broken down old car came from? Was it a rusty old heap?Great way to present your story.
What a great description of your trail ride Tracey. I wonder how the broken down old car came from? Was it a rusty old heap? A great way to present your writing.
Wow I never new you ride motorbikes like that!!!!!
You are amazing with the iPad, Tracey!You are able to present your writing so it captures the reader's attention. Your writing is getting better because it includes more details for the reader. When do you want to bring your motorbike to school?
Wow Tracey!I love how you have presented it.Wow, what strong words you have used like rev.Well done:-)
Awesome Tracey I like how you have a picture of your motorbikeand you have put a lot of effort in the words you have used.
Great story Tracey I like how you fly into the sky. That's really cool.From Henry
Cool, Tracey, I have never been on a motorbike and riding up hills that must be really fun.I like how you fly in the sky.You are really enthusiastic in this sport!!!